Monday, January 28, 2013

Stuart McDonald - Journal #2


 Usually when I think of poems, I remember them having a sentimental focus on a subject such as love or death, or maybe about a specific person.  This is probably because I see poems more as an outlet to express feelings or describe one particular thing in detail than to tell a tale like a novel or ballad would be better suited. 

 The title of this poem led me to believe that its subject would involve people who thought that they had all the answers in life but were actually far from the truth.  I arrived at this belief due to the improper grammar of the title, which may have indicated the author mocking the intelligence of the persons mentioned.  Upon hearing the next couple lines, I then thought it may have been about seven people that would play pool for money at a bar, the Golden Shovel.  The next stanza supported my original thought, adding in the fact that these people would ditch school to attend their games at the bar.  The poem mentioned they stay out late, which is common practice of younger people who frequent drinking establishments.  Noting that they “strike straight,” I assumed that they were good at what they did and won a lot of money off of the profession.

 My opinion began to shift a bit upon hearing the next two lines indicating that they “sing sin,” and “thin gin.”  This information caused me to think that they were older people that have seen and done a lot in their lives so they recount those experiences over the table, while consuming alcohol (also indicative of older age).  The last two lines threw me for a bit of a curve, so I interpreted June as simply a successful month for them           in terms of their winning.  The last line for the most part solidified my later thesis of them being of an older age and maybe even becoming sick due to their hobbies and past ways. 

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